All Comments on 'Have You in the Rain'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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I freaking love this. Awesome and very visual. I could imagine everything . A little grammar mistakes but that didn't stop it for being so erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

The last 4 paragraphs really got me. I loved it and found myself feeling like that's exactly what I want. Great stuff, please keep writing.

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