All Comments on 'Have You Seen Allyson Dare?'

that is just wrong, you should never force yourself on anyone, and the nurse who had her med. should have gotten a backbone and stopped it when she saw it and not just stood there watching

I agree with jernoma

This is fucking rape.

This should go in non consent category not lesbian. It's disgusting.

This is the most pathetic shit ever. Writing about lesbian sex is one thing, but writing about rape is so fucking wrong. What if you were Ally? That's a sick joke.

Okay, I admit I should have used a trigger warning on this part, and placed it into a different category (non-consent), and it will update to reflect those changes. But this story scene isn't what it seems. Ally isn't what she seems. Part 2 is coming out whenever Lit posts stories next, and if you care to read on you'll see what I mean. I am working on these and will go to the finish, I promise. No 7 year hiatus with no update to this story.

And I promise you, I put myself into every character I write. I'm Ally. I'm Keesha. I'm Trina. I'm everybody. It's what a writer does. I feel this got a low rating because of the content and not the writing. I should have made part 1 longer so there would be a better explanation.

And If you don't want to read part 2, that's fine too. But don't have my comment responses deleted, especially when I'm trying to provide explanations. And trolling comments stink. I can't become a better writer if all I get are F U's. pentopaper