All Comments on 'Having Fun with Dycke and Payne'

Normally I would award four stars for minor grammatical errors, but your story lines are so hilariously convoluted. I love it!

This is great I love the interactions between characters too .

But where is it going

I like the story so far. It's a better premise that the one that I've got swimming inside my head. I hope reading your story inspires my ideas of a erotic couples story.