by Noj
Probably my favorite of your stories so far. I would love to read more with Hayden. My only complaint is she wasn't really "put in her place" yet!
I'm still waiting for the cum to start oozing out of her... :(
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... I ignore the mistakes in logic and spelling and just thank you for the nice story. I liked it very much, but I'm also disappointed there is still no sequel... I'm still waiting and hope, you'll post the sequel soon...
I've loved this story ever since you first posted it and have re-read it many, many times. It's my favorite Hayden story, and I've read them all. I really hope you do the sequel for it! I would love to read how he fucks Hayden's round, perfect ass, and judging from the comments, I'm not alone!
Great story! People are ragging on you for your writing but I really think you captured the intensity that role-playing can create between lovers. (It's also hard to go wrong with Hayden Panettiere in the story;)