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UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 4 years ago

Got a fair way down the first page and still no idea who or what 'I' is. Male, female or somewhere in between.

Who is Steve, is this the name of the 'I' character?

In future tell the reader some information near the beginning, otherwise it is just nonsense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Hazel was a lot of fun to learn about. She has a lot of possibilities, hope she has more to share.

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Middle aged crossdresser. wltm similar. I tend to rattle off my stories. I have re-read them sometimes. But found myself writing something totally different to what I intended. So please excuse the bad grammar. Obviously if you want to volunteer so edit..... All comments are...