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by sunshine_1997

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More!

Great story; please keep the story going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
My 2 cents

A hot story! I like the characters and the flow of the story. I hope you continue writing this. I like the dialogue and banter between them. Thanks for your time and imagination.

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 4 years ago
A great start!

Definitely a story that you should continue. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Nice

Thank you for this great story. Do you consider a sequel?

RuckinLguardRuckinLguardover 2 years ago

Nice try, poor execution. English is obviously not your first language. I would highly recommend using an editor and proof reader.

chipmonk9chipmonk9about 2 years ago

Can write you a ch.2 it's been 2 years since this one

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Just a beginner in story writing and doesn't have any rules or such. So I write according to my liking and don't know if it's everyone's cup of tea.