All Comments on 'He Got Served'

Good story, Skippy.

everybody but the man they married.

Skippy is back with a winner. Great story about another wife jumping to conclusions.

Something about jumping to conclusions comes to mind. Kitty. That cracked me up. Well played.

5 stars

and its a good thing he didn't give her ammo

Nice story, well done!

Loved the whole story especially the last two paragraphs, how much was Kitty showing in her pregnancy that she needed larger maternity clothes.

He destroyed her with honesty and decency.

The perfect amount of words put together in a less than random manner leaving a wonderful story in their wake

The arsehole suffered no real consequences.

His missus stayed with him albeit in a short leash.

I would have preferred him staying with his wife because he was mugged and suffered serious injuries. Testicles destroyed, jaw broken, cock destroyed etc.

Then his wife forces him to wear French maids outfits while she services her lovers and he sucks their cum out of his wife.

Law suits. Admirer conning wife. Telling admirer's wife. Younger woman waiting. Wife has regrets. Man is a paragon of virtue. This is the formula loved dearly in LW.

AMerryman 2.0

... for a 750 word tale, that was incredibly detailed and entertaining.

Thank you for sharing.

5/5

No nonsense, straight-to-the-point BTB.

Still, I wonder how M&M's slander suit against Jessie went...

You can't feel sorry for idiots, and boy was this wife dumb! Thanks for the tale, author.

ITS ABOUT DAMN TIME! Glad you skip with bullshit and went back to writing good stories.

"I let someone else give me some bad advice and make some decisions he thought were best for me."

I know it's needed for the stories, but let's see: 1) Husband warns wife that sleaze wants her, she blows hubby's concerns off. 2) Sleaze brings wife "proof" of hubby's cheating. 3) Despite warnings about sleaze's intentions, wife believes him, decides to revenge cheat. 4) Wife chooses sleaze to cheat with, never even THINKING that his exposure of hubby's "cheating" might have had an ulterior motive.

You cracked me up 🤣.

Entertaining, funny, and a new twist. I haven't seen any other story about a process server getting together with a delivery target.

Snappy dialog, interesting plot that moves to a quick resolution.

Gave you 4 *s.

Thank you for the fine work. I'm definitely

AMerryman

P. S. Is it possible you could write a longer story. More characters. Complex plot. More of the entertaining dialog and humor. With your talent and ability a long story would definitely be a big winner 🏁.

Just a nice quick read. A changing of the guard, out with the old and in for the new.

Great Story

Nicely written with good plot development.

Thanks for a good read.

5* from me.

Very well written and expertly developed plot and characters.

Sad and cruel

It's hard to imagine the wife did not know the relationship with the older woman. Still, the banter was great.

not very bright or loving that she would take another person's word without confirming or even talking to her husband. he got rid of a wife who doesn't know the meaning of love marriage vows..

That touches (pokes in the eye with a sharp stick?) many of the LW cliches in a clever and humorous tale.

Thanks for the chuckles! ;-)

...win her lawsuit? Good short story. 5 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

Why does people still post non erotic stories here ?

There is a place for them : non-erotic.

I'll have another, Innkeeper, There is nothing like tripping over a sugar daddy.

all she did sofar was bitch, moan, cheat, lie, disrespect, and we have no idea if she contributed any of the finances.

ex wife ultimately won. married rich, divorced rich. did fuck-all to earn it.

I look forward to the future....all these newly minted career women....handing over half their earned stuff....to some guy that put a ring on em', and ditched them for another younger chick.

SImple but fun. Could see the ending coming from a ways away. Still, it brought a chuckle.

Was quite a amusing read, I know it was a flash story but felt rushed in places so could of been slightly longer in the hopes of losing the rush.

A quick and clever little story. Nothing new, but that doesn't detract from it. Thanks for sharing.

5*

like everyone, I'd love to see the story stretched out, but when it's a flash story like this, it certainly was well written. I would have loved to see MM actually win her law suit.

This is an enjoyable, well-written short story, with correct punctuation and spelling. (You even spelled “piqued” correctly rather than “peaked”). Keep doing what you’re doing and I’ll keep reading!

And definitely NOT erotic at all. Maybe it's time for a seperate category called "Pathetic men who have lost their women and gather to read revenge stories."

it worked well and it's another 5* read.

Gotta correct that erroneous phrase of yours, Anon:

Wife got a fifty/fifty split... of the money HER HUSBAND DIDN'T MOVE.

Not at all a long story, yet you seems to have forgot him saying:

"I had enough warning to protect a significant part of my assets."

Does that sound like someone who lost half of his money?

'Kinda pointless to read something if you don't understand what you're reading...

Excellent story, loved it.

No one in this story, in my opinion, is worth crap. Wife is stupid gets duped, cheats and is really an idiot but not malicious and is truly remorseful. Husband is a idiot who obviously wanted out long before, (if not he would have at least gone to counseling to save his family but he didn’t), so although it’s not written in the story but is obvious non the lessas he not even upset. Also as usual hubby comes out smelling like a rose with the hot young girlfriend and wife ends up alone and beaten. Totally unbelievable.

Jumping to conclusions is never the way to go, this wife learned the hard way. Well played.

All of Skippy's stories are one or two pages.

Many would have been more dramatic and entertaining if written to a longer form story.

AMerryman

Seemed rushed, perhaps try spend more time and build the story.

It does seem odd the wife didn’t know Mary-Margaret, such a close friend of the family.

Enjoyed but he should have bought cock cage

Loved it

but at least he planned for her down fall

Enjoyed again

Fun little story

fairness leads to being broke when you don't own the company. Why be fair when your mate wasn't fair before they gave away your pussy/dick. so, why be fair in the end of the marriage.

Thank you for a laugh! 5

That one doesn't always need gray matter and body part to get even, then again why get even when you can get ahead. How come my cheating ex didn't use a process server like this? Signed: BTW

There You go!..Add this to the list of strangest ways and scenarios of meeting your one true love (Process server) 5 Stars ★ ★ ★ ★ ★

Darn good, but what did the god-mother get $$$? M&M did not attend Jesse/Jon's wedding - and was unknown to Jesse? Jon was already willing to dump Jesse due to Blake's deliberate sabotage and Jesse's willing tryst with Blake.

The big question is did Mr. Jon Keiper frame that picture, adding the label "the picture that set me free".

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5*, Hooyah, salute....

The comments below are ALMOST as entertaining as Skippy's short story, but just almost. 5 stars.

Skippy47, Keep 'em comin'.

Very good. Revenge without trying, in the natural flow of events.

So I‘m supposed to believe that his wife didn‘t know and never met his godmother who seems to have been like a second mother to him??? Ridiculous...

She cheated and got caught and found out what she lost.

Huh!?

Trust and respect maybe love all tossed on trash heap

More pain for her also

jtwheels

Regardless of what people might think.

His wife was a vindictive bitch and the only reason he was allowed to stay was to be the father for the kids. She never had sex with her husband again. But she did have sex, in fact quite often AND Blake was forced to watch. When she fell pregnant from one of her lovers (yes multiple lovers) she forced him to raise the child.

He was able to find a good job that paid well to support her and the children but never got anything in return except for scorn and derision. He eventually had enough and after his last biological child left home he got drunk and ran into a tree at high speed. He was that much of a looser he did not kill himself but lived 10 more years being humiliated by his wife.

The story was obviously put together with the author's tongue firmly lodged in his cheek, but it was cute and written with some skill. 3*

What's with these readers? 5*s, perhaps to off set undeserved low ratings.

5*, but it's weird that the wife has never met his godmother. If she was practically a second mother to him, surely she would occasionally visit him. Did she not even attend their wedding?

oh that is 5 STARS, definitely. touche to the wife who saw the maternity clothes. he-haw.

Definite hole in the story with the wife not knowing the god mother or who she was.

WOW, this story really appealed to my sense of humor and fair play. About the only possible negative I could think of would be that it was too short. A lot more effort to expand the characters and dig into their lives a bit more would have made this story perfect. Please keep writing and NEVER lose the humor. Thanks and the 5 is well deserved.

5/5!!!!

Short and humorous. Just pithy and to the point. Jessica was an idiot; this is what results from a lack of communication. 5*s.

Well told not a lot of boring detail or long history. Also a great example of Olympic quality conclusion jumping. Well done.

Fantastic job!

i like the story. AAA+++

Did Mary Margaret go through with the lawsuit, or was that just to upset Jessie? All things considered, it was a very effective way to rub her nose in it.

Once again, this was no accident. Wifey wanted to try some “ strange”, and used this for an opportunity. She was still trying to decide, if she wanted to trade up, when he mistakenly got the divorce petition. Unlike your other stories, he actually dumped the bitch. Good for him! 5 stars.

Its truly sad when one has no faith in their spouse. Nice story and well told, paced, and written. 5 all day.

Loved it. Inviting out the process server shows brass balls!

Not bad btb flash

Things aren’t always what they appear to be and it’s best to get all the facts before leaping to conclusions especially where ulterior motives are evident

Super… Our son is going to be huge…

Great story.

Not enough payback on Blake.

Mac1729 you do realise it is a woman right? Women do not trust their husbands and will believe others over them, she still believed he cheated even though he was proven to be completely innocent

There should b a ton more payback in Blake

Finally something to my liking.

Loved it! It's amazing how a person will throw somebody away because they think the grass is greener..............5 stars

Clever, brilliant, surprising ,and easy to follow.

Boy o boy, I really like a humorous burn story. And well written.

GUESS WHAT???? I LOWERED MY CHOLESTEROL TODAY!!!!!!!

Why is it in these stories that the husband/wife doesn't KNOW people in their spouses life? Wouldn't M&M have been at the wedding if they were that close? Not just this writr but others do similar stories where the spouse should have known who it was in the picture.

Excellent, well done!

Very good story. One of the first short stories I very much liked.

LOL, great story

Great story, so-so writing.

What a clever tale. So worth the reading time. For me it was a 5* all the way.

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Great story - writing & the retribution. She took & acted on bad info & tried burning her husband, just to get burned herself. Gotta love it! 5 stars Bob

Sounds like a pretty week marriage to start with.

Well done, thanks for the entertainment.

Nice to the make rational decisions and stay the course.

Sounded like a really weak marriage.

Definately 5 stars

Nice way to meet a new bride. 5 STARS

So, did M&M end up getting Jessies 50% of the divorce settlement in her slander and libel suit?

Good flash story

Keep on flashing