All Comments on 'He Knows Pt. 03'

I read the three parts in order. The writing quality is outstanding. But I think you should have categorized the entire story as BDSM and not anal even though anal is quite important to the story. I am not a devotee of the genre (BDSM) and that accounts for a less positive reaction than the quality element would deserve. I hope you write some non-BDSM (and non-coercive) themed stories at some point.

This story was just as hot and exciting as the first two. I loved this ending. I’ll miss this series, but am so glad it’s here to stay!

I love this series (except for the watersports)!!!

We need more about this couples adventures.

the epilogue sucks

why is he fucking her pussy now whats the point after ruining her pussy how could a lose pussy (fisted) give any man satisfaction

afterall he only desires anal sex from her no dick likes lose pussy her pussy sucks he himself destroyed her vagina for any man when he put his way too big fist in her so whats with the useless pussyfucking it serves no purpose

only lose cunts and grannies enjoy fisting

how could he come into that big hole i hated lose pussy theres no tightness no friction so i avoid girls who sleep around more pften

and why is he fucking her ass so slowly after he losen it whats the point of all this rigourous no break no healing anal training if he cant rut it hard and fast in her ass ?

why so gentle now ?he is guilty and sorry about watersport but not fisting her?

The anti-fisting crusader returns... I don't remember the guy ever saying he *didn't* want her pussy.

I have to say, watersports is very hit or miss for me, but you actually made it really cute and sweet. And, despite your disclaimer, it's probably the closest thing I've read to actual BDSM practice on this site. Overall, good stuff!

The story itself is engaging and very erotic in parts, but you utterly failed to highlight an internal cleansing routine at any point, which is a serious miss for anyone writing serial chapters about anal, unless you’re also incorporating a scat scene, which quite frankly is a very rare kink indeed.

The ideal way to incorporate it into a story like this is to use it as part of the foreplay, it can work very well if written sympathetically to the characters and storyline. Cheers, Ppfzz. 4⭐️