All Comments on 'He Laughs, She Gives In.'

by leerae134

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ILienBagbyILienBagbyalmost 13 years ago
Now, This Is A

well written tale. So much information with so few words, so much emotion with so few histrionics. Please, leerae, please continue writing. This reader will be waiting for your next submission with much expectation and with little doubt about its excellence.

ukulelemanukulelemanalmost 13 years ago
Impressively hot

One of those stories that takes erotica another step or two without sacrificing the heat. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
HOTTTTT!!!

sooooo hot, but not near long enough. more!

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