All Comments on 'He Outraged My Modesty'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Heh?

This was artsy-fartsy in the extreme. I never knew what was going on.

And who the hell is Mayil? She showed up three times and vanished.

This was clearly written by someone with a very skewed world view...

chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
Thanks For Sharing***

You covered a lot of subjects of cultures I know nothing about. But it's still a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
an excellent attempt

the story could have been told probably with a few more details but it is good as it is. None of the usual bad grammar and careless syntax and general verbal infelicities. The cultural problems are not onesided, in any caseThe writer may take the help of a reader who understands what the western reader is unlikely to understand.

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