All Comments on 'He Took Her'

WBC are busy jizzing right now over this tale, every element of the lifestyle touched on, it is like birthday and xmas for many wannabe cucks; read, spank, flame

especially when they are smarter than you think you are. TK U MLJ LV NV

no quality wheat here, just a bad case of weavil infection

this wheat is, as said, of extremely poor quality and just to destroyed, burned or whatever is done with it. I agree, however, brilliance in one area does not exclude stupidity in other ways, but then too, nothing excludes you to being cheated on by other people or someone you trust.He should just find his balls, if any left, kill that guy, take the money ann hide and send the powers that be after Gerald and company since he knows of their secret dealings. What more he's got to loose?

the worst crap i have read in a long time

The author should have shown where he lied to his wife. Its implied that he did but fails to show occassions. The wife knew about his business but not eveything so how did he lie as parts were compartmentalised intentally.

He also should have been allowed to confront the wife to challenge her claim - the wife whould have mentioned the perticular lies that annoyed her.

what the fuck was that all about load of shit 1 star

This author has no feelings to subject people to this crap they pretty well assured themselves their fate.

I understand revenge. I understand payback. I even understand his wife doing what she did... but I don't understand him getting off watching them together.

to WBC. Getting off on being cucked is what defines RandomHardon, poopchoot, huecuck, cuckeye and the rest. The humiliation of the cuckoldry fuels the self-loathing. Story is 5* on their jizz-o-meter.

good story but If anyone need pay back it's the poor guy whos wife & boss fucked over. As for him on the island I'd just kill the guy and put a price on him slut wifes head

The bitch troll with the pin sized dick will help him ease his pain. Go ahead bitch troll bark and call everyone cucks when the biggest(smallest) cuck in the world is you, every one fucks you over that's why you love these cucks in these stories so much. You among you most close and loyal friends.

And blows

No one here is wort much respect, and the kid will be like his father and the wife. Talk about not bing hinest, and the way wife is so readily taken! AS for him,, go get a duplicate passport and get away from there, in all ways. Salvage something, if only the opportunity to get some normalcy.

who'd have thunk it? How many other alts?

This is top shelf cuck material, huecuck, Random, cuckeye probably spontaneously orgasmed reading this, especially at the end where he faces salad tossing, cock smoking and getting cornholed.

story sucks.

The very worst type of cuckold, almost as bad as that troll with the pin sized prick, these two cucks should get together and jack each other off to other cuckold stories.

cuck story as evidenced by the wbc turnout, cuckdogg, Random, poopchoot, ped0, reading (and re-reading), spanking, then in fits of self-loathing leaving nasty comments. author gets honorary spot in wbc for this effort.

The amount of humiliation in this story makes it a "how-to" on cuck writing. Cucks like Random have read it dozens of times making this essential reading for cucks, wannabe cucks, and authors looking to write cuck stories.

Story reads like a technical writing. You are on the right road, a little more creativity in putting your sentence structures and ideas together.

The husband is crushed because he married a lying cheating slut who turned against him at his boss's urging? For two years she cheated on him because he lied to her? What was the lie? If he stole money it was for her. She went along with a facade of a marriage for 2 years just because her lover who was calling the shots said so. She seduced her lover's son just because he told her to. She acted out on a video fucking others to hurt her husband just because her lover said so. Is this a honorable woman who values honesty. Does she think that she will get that from her lover the arch-criminal? The husband stole from his boss but the wife sold her soul to this "devil" so who is worse off? In the end this story is a silly cuck fantasy because anyone successful as John would realize that he really did not lose anything and he would have not went to the Cayman Isles - money or no money. The boss also would have not let John live since he know too much about his dealings.

Couldn't even finish it.

Unrealistig foolish story. Nothing seems to fit here.

You didn't do a well enough job of telling us what he did to his employer. Loving wife? She trusted a stranger more than her husband? she took someone else story without even asking her husband! Not what I call a loving wife! And Though he was a thief she was still fucking around on her husband.

Inconsistent, no logical reasoning.. just a complete MISS

Oh, he was stealing money from you? He never told me that! Lying bastard! I told him if he ever lied to me, I mean ever about anything, ever, then we were through. Divorceland! Whelp, I guess it's you and me, gun-running shady syndicate boss who paid my husband under the table to launder his ill-gotten gains. I bet you would never lie to me and tell me all about your lying business deals. Get in here and give me your dick, then we can be together forever! Oh, you want me to wait two years before getting your revenge on my soon to be ex husband? Ok. And you want me to get pregnant before I even divorce him? I am sure this will work out. No way you could be stringing me along. It was my husband, after all, who was the liar liar pants on fire. Oh and you want me to fuck your son? Just to get the virgin label off him, not on a continual basis, right? Ok. Yeah and despite all this filming and long term humiliation, which he totally deserves, leave my soon to be ex hubby all the Caymen Islands money. Ok? Great. And just to be clear, no more revenge, like don't turn him into a white slave gay bitch while he is down there. K? Thx

This story has to be the crowning achievement of this author. The biggest POS she ever authored.

a lot of crap get a life please and don't put us through this mumbo jumbo not even a 1 from me

What 26thNC said and I say I'm out of here. Signed: BTW

I quite liked it.

Sucked!

Biggest load of crap ever written.

Well, Kelly, you lost love to be a whore, you say if they lie, they're done, well, the boss lied to you, so you're done, done being something of a woman, that poor baby will grow up horribly, a bastard to society because of a lie