All Comments on 'Heading For Trouble'

Really good T! What a wicked twist.

You shall henceforth be called the master of twists ... Really enjoyable piece, well done.

Good luck in the contest!

I did love the twist at the end...

A very weird and creepy story but very well written. I hope it wins.

That was a trip! Well written and I must say that you mind is even more warped that ever, congratulations!

Muahahahaha. Beautiful. Great Read. You trip me out, dude. Loved it!

That's what happens when you think with the wrong head :)

very good twist, great story!

I just love all the hidden doors of your mind.

You never disappoint me, especially this time of year! :)) Good luck in the contest!

Cruelly funny twist. Loved it. Good luck in the contest.

. . . could really express my reaction to this story. Very well done, Tom.