All Comments on 'Heading West'

Great short story!

great start good potential for a nice series hope you can get into continuing the story many ways to go with this thank you for your time and effort

Wonderful, would be a beautiful sight to witness

I once knew a woman whose name was Opal Ann (well, more or less). It was while I was living in Oregon, too, and wouldn't you know it but I would have loved to to have spent time peeing with her, but alas, I was too timid.

Thank you for both a wonderful story and a chance to think back on good times.

A different kind of story, short but very creative and kinky. I'd like to read more like this.