All Comments on 'Healing Rites of Passage Ch. 03'

I'm addicted to this story and can't leave it alone. I'd really like some progress on Abben and Bella though I know its a working progress. My heart bleeds for them both. Carry on with the great work.

Sometimes its tiring waiting for the stories, but I'm glad this has come through. I am really wondering where this new revelation will bring us to though.

I really love the characters... and I miss Ella! You've got to bring her back!

When you write things that are about things in the Bible, you should give more references to that book. You have to remember that God made "man" after His likeness, and called it "good", and that was without clothing! Such writings as this should take that into account and use it accordingly. And there is no reference to marriage as our society is using "marriage". God made us "good" and that was the ability to fuck and breed like animals.

Wow, if it gets any hotter my screen will burnup...LOL Love it.