All Comments on 'Heart of Gold Ch. 04'

love this story cant wait for more!

So glad you didn't leave this one. It's a great story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Can't wait to see the happy ending.

there are still some glaring errors in grammer and verbiage but its not as bad as the previous entries. practice makes perfect; so keep plugging away until you get it right.

I like where this is going but there are so many things in their way. I can't believe he's pimping himself out whether or not it's to help his family. Does Brendan think he can keep dating Audrey and still have Logan? I'd try to get someone to read it over since there are alot of mistakes that could easily be corrected and they detract from it. You had a paragraph repeated and several words missing or spelled wrong.

This is a really good story! Why is it so lowly rated? Hmm...smh

Goodness! Love the cliffhanger...hope you update fast!

I know you are getting a time off and everything I respect that but please I wanna know what happens

Classic love it... hope there is more about Rich to... off to read the next one