All Comments on 'Heart-Shaped Headfuck'

Magnificent story; very hot and very real.

Great stuff, and really funny. Part of me hopes next time Shane gets to play the tricks, but...

You brought the characters and the sex to life with terrific writing. Great job!

I loved it. That was one of the best stories I've read. I'd hate to know where you get your ideas from, if it's real life or only the tattered, blackness of your mind...it's downright scary. Keep it up. I love your writing.

Blonde meets boy. Blonde blows boy. Blonde fucks with boy's head while they both enjoy mind-blowing sex. Boy likes being fucked with while being fucked. Have I got that right, Jaymal? I loved it. I especially enjoyed the relationship backstory. Thanks for sharing the love.

I nearly didn't read it because the title didn't interest me, but hey what a surprise! You totally had me from nearly the first sentence and I loved both Shane and Sammy.

Cheers

Brilliant! I wonder what she does for Easter...

That was hot and hilarious, and I dare say, even better than its predecessor. Shane is an awesome character, so realistic, and Sammy is the perfect vibrant match for him. Their relationship is equal parts sweet and sexy, and your writing style is amazingly sharp. I felt like I was right there with Shane as he spent the afternoon chasing down his prize and reminiscing about erotic highlights with her. lol. Loved it and I honestly can't wait for the next thing you write.

Part of me was as incensed as Shane by all of the ways Sammy ruined his plans and drug him all over the place, but the anticipation it built was exquisite and, of course, explosive at the end. Thank you for yet another wonderful contribution to this site. Your writing brings up the quality of offerings on Literotica, but it's your imagination and inventiveness that really makes your stories spark to life. Great job!

Very well written and your comments are much deserved. Good luck in the contest.

I read this story/voted last week but didn't make a comment, apparently (bad Kai!). I think I got sidetracked with the desire to go off and read the first story. This was great fun (though Shane is much more patient that I will Ever be). I would love love love to see Shane pay her back... perhaps on Earth Day? ;)

should have read it a few days earlier, might have given me some ideas for valentine's day... great story, had a lot of fun reading it!

Such an imagination. The build up through the treasure hunt to ultimately find there was such an intense purpose to it and then the pay off for Shane, Sammy and most importantly the reader. As always super erotically charged writing. Thank you for this great story.

What an amazing fuck!

New York City--unlike, oh, Boston--doesn't name its subway lines by color--so there's no Green Line at Broadway-Lafayette, though the 6 (green on maps) does go from E. 86th to Bleecker Street, which connects to Broadway-Lafayette. And if you want to see park "wardens" you'd best return to Great Britain. But even though you got your NYC from a guidebook, the story was excellent.

Took TOO long. The original episode was excellent, this one could have taken two pages. BOO!!!

Perfect sequel to Yuletide Mindfuckery.