All Comments on 'Heart Strings Ch. 03'

I don't think there are any words to convey how good this was. It was erotic, suspenseful and emotional. Fantastic.

Very interesting story. Thanks and keep up the exploration.

This was such a nice story. I wish it was longer (like your other stories). I absolutely loved it & I love your writing! I wish you would re-edit & make it longer. Maybe explain why she wanted to control her. Her struggles with being controlled then falling in love with each other. Etc... I dunno, I really wish it was more than 7 pages :(

This is my favorite out of all your stories! Again love conquers all evils! Bravo!!! Thank you again Miss Lisa!

This was quite a departure from what I usually like to read. Obviously fantasy! But what I came away with was, Sandra's love must have been so powerful to be able to overcome such evil. Well done. :) ~ L

thank you 4 posting this story

Started reading because it was well written and sexy, couldnt stop reading it, had to know how it ended. Glad it has a happy ending, but damn scary.

The "love conquers all" trope is ridiculously cliche'd; therefore, if you use it, you have to sell it REALLY hard in order to not come across as cheap, and in this story that didn't really happen. Also, the very last scene felt rushed. Overall, however, this whole story is of impressive quality. Well done.

A very original and enjoyable story! Well done!

yup, creative and hot. I enjoy your wrting very much.

Wow loved the stories wish we knew what happened at Mrs. Bates's apartment when she made Sandra go over there.

It’s very nice to see a conflicted controller, too often these kind control stories are just some nerdy lad getting his rocks off as he destroys lives left and right with no repercussions.

Anyways big fan, I wish you would write an extra chapter of all your big stories, kind of just an epilogue with smut, but I acknowledge that your work is more artistic than most here and it might devalue them