All Comments on 'Hearth and Home'

Somewhat unpleasant characters in a usual setting. Then things change in an unusual but plausible way and a quite different, surprising, and interesting ending occurs. Different and enjoyable. 5*

Yeh, wish she had said she loved him at the end, which I think by then she most certainly did. Nice turnaround even if a little extreme!

But I had to. If I ever feel like writing again, I'll post a longer comment about this story. Thanx for the great read.

Poor author can't take negative comments.

This is a story about rape and abuse by a controlling, violent man.

Anyone who reads this and likes it, reverse the roles in your head. A woman who cheated and admits she didn't love her husband finds out he plans to leave her. She threatens him, insults him, tells him he's terrible on bed, and makes clear her intention to kill him and any woman he sleeps with if he divorces her. You wouldn't be cheering for that. You'd, rightly, call that character a psycho bitch. So why is that behavior okay coming from a man?

One cheating cunt and her psychotic cheating husband who has a strong pedo vibe . And likes to have sex while his kids watch. Ahe thinks this is a good marriage despite the fact the dumb bastard is only keeping it together with a gun.

Fuck sake, you used to be good. Whats this garbage?

Entertaining story until the latter part of the the epilogue, that was just awful completely destroyed the tone, every sentence made him seem more inept as a husband, until he seemed to believe that her infidelity was his own fault, it was just laid on way too thick.

I gave it a 4.

It was intriguing and scary at times but had an interesting ending.

Fucking god damn cuckold shit!! He had the gun right there to end it the way a MAN would do it, and he caved like a fucking coward. Now he's going to spend the rest of his life slurping nigger cum from her diseased cunt while she laughs at him behind her back! This faggot shit is what's wrong with this god damn site, they shouldn't let these fucking pervert cuckold shits post this crap here, take it over to the faggot section!

Where I live many asshokes have had a gun poked in their face for trying to break up a marriage. It isn't always the husband. There have been a few fathers, a few brothers, even friends. Quite a few bastards simply disappeared. Speculation runs rampant that they were thrown into alligator pits. In most cases the cheating wife almost immediately resumed being a loving wife. So the husband in this case threatened Weaver. Now that is how you deal with scum that tries to break up marriages. Readers need more stories where the husband is less wimp and more family protector.

...I'm glad these two idiots are off the market keeping each other company. They deserve each other!

His descriptions were long and tedious and kinda like a mafia boss with a third grade education! The worst though is...the ass-hole has a screw loose!

She's a whore for her promotions and he's just a plain ass-wipe!

The character doesn't make sense! His kids are everything and his wife is....well, he tolerates her! Yeah, right!

Not a good plot...not a good story!

It was very interesting how your hero slowly slid away from being the self-centered asshole who drove his wife into another mans arms, and moved into being a real man who took care of his wife and family. Very subtle! So subtle in fact that I bet many readers missed it. You gave us many clues but they were cloaked in machismo. I bet many male readers fell into your trap. I know I almost did.

I've read a lot of your writing and this is one I'll remember. Superlative effort!

weird and convoluted, hmm idk this was like a love ant hate thing, guy sounds like he was one of those dumb fucks that voted for trump and then saw what a fuck up he is and was like damn sorry guys i fucked up lol

Trump and his refusal to accept failure has brought this country back from the brink of disaster and you simpleminded DemocRAT dipshits are too damned blind, stupid and stubborn to acknowledge it. Fox News USED to be 'fair and balanced' but not anymore. They've had Liberals Chris Wallace, Juan Williams, Bret Baier and Sheppard Smith seeded into their programming for quite a while but, just recently, they took on (of all the corrupt scumbags they could have hired) Donna Brazile... the bitch who got fired from CNN for slipping the questions that would be asked during the 2016 Presidential Debates to Hillary Clinton. What a stellar addition to their staff. Fox has bragged their asses off about how high their rating is and how low CNN's is but, with the addition of Brazile to the gang of Ghouls they've quietly assembled, it won't be long before their ratings with be a dead heat.

All I can say is fuck CNN, fuck Fox and fuck you, too, enderlocke77.

As for this story, I thought it was very well done. The problem with this country is that the Socialist Infested Education and Corrupt Legal systems have 'taught' and crushed the testosterone out of this generation of Americas males. Shame on OUR generation for not paying attention and letting the rotten bastards get away with it. President Trump is fighting to reverse the damage they've done and we'd better get off of our asses and stand beside him in this fight. Pulling the rug on him by letting the Dimwitocrats take back the House Of Representatives was like telling him that you were already tired of winning and didn't want him to accomplish anything more. How fucking stupid ARE you people?

five stars for this story. Zero stars for the dumb fucks who vote for lying Democrats. Open your eyes... detach yourself from politics and take a long, objective look at Nancy Pelosi and Chuck Schumer. If you can't see and don't hear two of the sneakiest, most cunning, conniving creeps in politics, you have no business voting for anyone. Why do you think they and the rest of those rat bastards want to cancel the 2nd Amendment? If/when you don't have any weapons, how will you defend yourself against people like THEM??

The last two comments; one I think accused me of voting for Trump, what nonsense! The second liked my story but went on a rant about how great Trump is and what bad people the Democrats are. I don't get it. Isn't this basically and porn site? I've been accused of being a racist in a country where racism is endemic. Does that make me a monster? To some people it does. I voted for Bush 41, then Clinton, then Gore, then McCain, but neither Trump nor Hillary. No, I plugged in Biden's name; he was my best choice in 2016. Does that make me a liberal? Hardly.

Remember Rodney King? "Can't we all just get along?"

Those two didn't need any counseling, They already had it by the firm of Smith & Wesson. Great story!

I voted for Trump. I always vote Republican because they are the lesser of two evils. By the way, I'm a registered Independent.

Thanks for a good story and some laughs from the comments

You almost lost me on this story with the macho big pistle, I am going to blow your head off for messing with my family!!! You know that this is the crap that all the man haters and their politically correct butt kissers use to justify that all men are physically abusive and have to be removed from all positions of power and responsibilities, then sucked out of all testosterone, before being pumped full of estrogen before being castrated don't you???

Nice save at the end though! Even the heterosexual man-hatter's have to like the realization that actually treating a wife with respect, caring and especially what she needs to actually experience orgasms and real intimacy make her feel loved by her formerly clueless, selfish husband!!!

Not a bad story, he took care of business.

Second time around for me. I did not leave a comment last time. Will do so now.

One of your better stories and it gets 5/5

Similar to the last one I read from you (reading LW in alphabetical order), little off kilter on how you got around to the ending but it all pulled together. I would have liked her perspective more directly, although your "delivery" get me most of the way there. 4*

I loved it! The introduction and the backstory provided me with a masterclass in how to do it. 5 stars and added to my favourites.

Excellent!

Simply excellent!

You misquoted the song lyric... strangely I did not dislike this one as much as some of your others, despite being the second one I've read with a fuckin' Nazi reference...

They don't teach this stuff in health education/sex education class. (All you get don't do this, and don't do that) To grow old together needs the 2nd amendment, instead of the 10 Commandments?