All Comments on 'Heart's Guardian'

by JDecker

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 9 years ago
I'll have to look up all the gaelic to fully understand the story

But I do feel as if I've walked in half way through.

But I liked it

doug_noughtdoug_noughtover 9 years ago
Liked the sex

I'm too dense and much too dumb to get the subtext, which I assume after a couple of google searches involves Celtic mythology. But I really. really enjoyed the mother-son sex. Five stars.

badmommy71badmommy71over 9 years ago
this cant be over!!

please write more hon! every good son should cum inside his mothers hot mommy hole!!! ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
loved it

If you are goingi. to use gaelic,add the translation please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

good story needs a second chapter

ap2techap2techover 9 years ago
I got it... I think

Enjoyed the subtle plot twists in your story. Google Translate helped a bit also.

I think magic is involved here and a part two must be written. Mom and girlfriend will battle for son's affections but who will win?

I think at least five parts to tell a suspenseful, erotic tale would be great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Truly a Work of Art

Your older stories have been favorites of mine for years now. I've hoped for a long time that you'd come back to write more. I've never seen another author that could describe the loving bond between mother and son as well as you can. This story wasn't just porn, it was true literature. Please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
what Yuletide cheer--the great JDecker is back!

In a great story of hot motherfucking. 19 year old Sean is still a virgin, but you can count on his mother Ciara to fix that. Step by step Ciara introduces him to the joys possible to a loving boy and his loving mommy. She shows Sean her ample breasts, which nourished him as a little baby and are destined to nourish his lust again and again. Ciara handles her Sean's young balls with all the care and affection that only a mother can have for her darling baby boy's balls. Her son's mesmerized by the lavish bush between his mother's legs, and he bends to kiss the wonderful hairy hole he came out of. Sean's head is now between his mommy's thighs, where it last was 19 years before. The boy is harder than he's ever been in his life, and, as she's done for him time and again, his mother comes to the rescue. Ciara guides her boy's fat young cock up inside her "motherly warmth," up to his balls. Instantly, Sean knows that that's exactly where his penis belongs, always has and always will, ensconced in the "motherly vagina." In truth, nothing can ever feel as good to a boy's cock as his own mother's cunt. The cheeky lad goes into a fuck-frenzy, pounding and ramming and giving his mother some well-deserved convulsive cums. Till Sean blows those hot young balls of his and shoots his mommy full of his creamy semen. I see that doug_nought and badmommy love this story as much as I do. It's so liberating being part of a community of likeminded folks. Thanks to JDecker for bringing us together. All of us know the truth of the old saying, "a boy's penis and his mother's vagina--made for each other."

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hot motherfucking indeed

There is no better feeling than cumming inside your mother. She gave birth to you, raised you, and if all goes right, took your virginity like my mother did for me. I still cant get enough of her hot tight and steamy mother pussy. All she has to do is spread her legs and I'm eating her to orgasm before fucking her and filling her up until my cum runs out of her like a river. My father still doesn't have a clue that my little brother and sister are mine and not his. hahahaha!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Would have given a five, but...

since I could not translate the Irish, I could not tell how the words Ciara used helped in the story.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
My Heart Is In You

and

may the cat eat you, and the devil eat the cat

I fear that if there is a part 2 of this story, it won't only be the roses that turn black and . . . .

JDeckerJDeckerover 9 years agoAuthor
Gaelic

Hi,

Several people have been asking me about the Gaelic parts. They aren't that crucial, actually, they are there just to add some flavor. I can only hope they are even correct, since I just used a couple of hours of googling and a general knowledge of languages as research. If they aren't, I can fix them if someone says what's wrong.

Another problem is I wrote half of this in like last February, so I don't even myself remember what the exact meanings were, although the guy above there mentioned a couple of them. Basically the things Ciara says to Niamh are just some imaginative curses directed at her. The part she says to Sean is just a way of saying "I love you". Directly translated it means something like "I carry your heart inside me" as was already mentioned.

"Leannán sí"

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Leanan_s%C3%ADdhe

Niamh necessarily isn't one for real, it might just be an insult... Then again it might not...

"Ciara O'Faolain" is a reasonably normal name, but it also roughly means something like "dark-haired beauty of the wolf clan".

BG187BG187over 9 years ago
I didn't like it

Story was written well enough but the way the mother initiated the sexual act seemed very unrealistic. I'll keep a eye out for your next stories. 4 stars though. Nothing like a story that has proper grammar and a decent storyline.

parthenogenesisparthenogenesisover 9 years ago
Excellent story

Heart's Guardian had a lot more to it than the average mom/son story. Most excellent weaving of the real and the supernatural.

homerjayhomerjayabout 9 years ago
loved it

will read more of your stories. this was golden. thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wonderful Story

Thank you for a great story. My family is of Celtic descent, Scottish Highlands. Although you chose Irish, I loved the way you used the language in your story and also the mannerisms. True love was pictured here. Please consider a part two to this story.

Bealtaine an bhiotáille Ceilteach treoir do lámh mar a scríobhann tú

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Virgin son cumming inside mommy over and over again all through the night of lovemaking is realistic. No son can be content with only a single round of creampie like it happens in many stories.

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