All Comments on 'Heat'

by TheSleepingKing

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I never cummed so hard in my life! Over and over and over again. Thanks Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

How do you flip and shrug your eyebrows?? I have never heard of those expressions.

You could use an editor to help with spelling and punctuation.

You need to describe what the man looks like. How old is he? We know he is older, but his age isn't mentioned.

The characters need some dialog to build up to the sex. The need some flirting to get things going.

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Happy to be sharing stories people enjoy reading. Enjoy reading stories other people like to share. Story suggestions are welcome. As is conversation. If I have a character you like, what mischief should they get up to next?