All Comments on 'Heat Ch. 01'

by ElvenAngel

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Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
A hot coupling to be sure

Damn that was smokin' hot monkey lovin'....uuuuuuuuuummmmhummm... yummy

quiesincaelisquiesincaelisover 12 years ago
Of course he loves her

How can there be any doubt? He loves her! She's his mate, period!

Nobody breaks down the door and risks prison for the woman they don't love. They just call replacement if they don't care. C'est l'amur!

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxalmost 13 years ago
if you were the the police that walked in

What would your reaction be :)

justme713justme713almost 13 years ago
That was good!

I guess the neighbors care! Love it so far!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Dry opinion

Passionate and awkward .

kittyhawk555kittyhawk555about 14 years ago
Nice work

Enjoyed the story, but the spelling mistakes are distracting...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Amazing

Absolutely... wonderfully fast and passionate description of how sex between a dominant male lycanthrope and a female in heat would be... you are truly gifted in your vision

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Fucking hot!

OH my... after reading this story I want to call my bf and tell him to take me... lol... good job!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Animal HEAT

VERY hot EA! Quite extraordinary animal lust in that story. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

ChainzzChainzzover 18 years ago
Very hot dollface !

Hiya gorgeous ...

was paging thru some things and found your stories . I didnt even realize you were a writer . Nice work here , was on the edge of my chair all the way thru !

Off to go find more then ...

kisses sexy ..

Chainz

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow!!

i loved every second of it....in one word....Amazing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
OMG I LOVED IT!

That was so erotic! I wanted to be her!

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