All Comments on 'Heat in the Heart of Texas'

and the local color was impeccable. Hill country Texas and Austin are my kind of places. I could see the country and smell the air. Very well-written by a professional-grade writer. Just a few quibbles will follow via "Send Feedback". It's a pleasure to quibble really good writers. Thank you, VM.

this story took a little too long to build, it needed a stronger start, sex at first, then maybe step back with a flash back device. the descriptive passages and general writng was good, maybe it would work better as a couple of chapters for a longer work, where the foundation takes a little longer to create. the sexual sequences were constructed well. there were some elements I really liked but over all it didn't work well as a short story

I'm not usually into the whole swinging thing, but you made it hot hot hot!

Nice one, Bear.

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