All Comments on 'Heat of the Night Pt. 02'

by Shaima32

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MaonaighMaonaighabout 5 years ago
The plot thickens...

...and most enjoyably at that. As always, Shaima, you don't let us down. I've said previously that your characters are real people and yet they're never mundane. They are always interesting and you find yourself rooting for them. So on with the show...

Slurpy29Slurpy29about 5 years ago
Another tantalizing read

Your writing never seizes to amaze me. The perfect way you develop each character with the story makes the reader become part of the story. I feel I’m in the same room watching Siobhan play with the collar. Your definitely a can’t miss reading writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
real life yet compelling

I always love your writing...makes me feel like i'm there. the characters are musing about matters close to the heart and important, weighing the consequences...good stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
So easy to read........

i am quite enthralled with this. Just wish the bites were a bit bigger.

Lovely story.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 5 years ago
Very good second chapter

And I'm really looking forward to the next! Thank you for sharing this with us!

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