All Comments on 'Heather and Michael'

The difference is large, yet I still enjoyed this story!

Good work, thanks!

ok why does every one half to be sluts

Very good, thank you!

It would be super should this one have subsequent chapters....

Second time I have read this. You need to get your grammar and spelling together, errors spoil the flow when reading it. Learn the differences between lay, lie and laid and when to use them. Can we have a continuation to this story?

Love it. I am one who can read past minor errors and just enjoy the fantasy. Off to read some more of your wonderful writing now.

i loved the story. i have always heard that twins have a special bonding with each other & this story shows that it is true. more love to them.

Okay to good story. Wasn't very exciting however. Sex scenes were not vivid or stimulating.