All Comments on 'Heather's Boys Pt. 01'

No, but it's a start. It did say "to be continued". I'll give it a chance to develop.

I think this is a great start of a story. It's interesting to hear the story from the perspective of a female roommate, as opposed to the subbie guy being abused. I really hope you continue writing this one.

I thought this was a very strong start for a story and a very tantalizing "to be continued" ending. I really like how you described the sub-dom relationship from the perspective of a woman who isn't a dom to begin with, but is clearly intrigued and turned on by it. It looks as if you've decided to not continue writing it, which is really disappointing because I think it's a great story from a unique (or nearly unique) perspective and had a great deal of promise.