All Comments on 'Heather's Bus Journey Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This made me so wet

This story got me so horny heather’s a little slut who needs to be punished, just like me ;)

entemeentemeover 6 years ago
Lovely story

Please continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Absurd

Absurd

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I liked it

It's a good story but needs more development as it covers too much too quickly. As you say writing these stories is harder than it looks.

rodryder44rodryder44over 3 years ago

Heather had to had practice with something down her throat to give the old guy such a good blow job. I wonder if her uncle did teach her. There is so much drama in the one-page chapters. Naturally, Heather isn't on the pill.

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Hi. I like to read stories a lot. It's fun! Now I'm going to try to write stories too. I know it's not easy to do but I'll try my best.

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