All Comments on 'Heather's Moon Cycle Pt. 02'

Oh my God, more? Please, you're embarrassing us all. No more.

This is too short to be considered a chapter. It isn't even a page.

Where is the wife in this story? No rating...this isn't LW...

....the story is both destructive and specious.

And by the way, this description of the Wiccan coven doesn't square with my experience with them, either individually or as a group.

I suppose there are any variations.

It seems silly to me.

And I would not have so little regard for you as a brave contributor as to blow sunshine up your skirt when this offering was so far off road for me.

"Her last words hung in the air like a grenade in my mind." Not for long, presumably.

and ignorance can be illuminated. You just go ahead and write whatever you want to write, sweetie.

# 1

didn't read this, but every story that bonnie rates deserve a 1* vote.

This was way too short for even a flash tale. The writing is just terrible. Not worth the time spent to read it. So naturally the cows Bonnie and Vastie will love it!

Is there a category for STUPID?

If you're going to write a tale, take it to a conclusion.

You write as if your mother walked into the room and you had to send and shut down.

So sad.

Bonnie are you talking about yourself again. Gave it a 1 and that's being generous.

Hold your chapters until you have enough material for your readers to get into your story. Such short chapters give us nothing, and your ratings show it.

even though the chapters are short, they are enticing. I do agree about hanging onto them a little longer before you release them just so you have more, because they are really good.

I need more of this. Sadly, it appears the chapters are on hiatus. :-(