All Comments on 'Heaven'

Maya,

I am deeply touched by this piece. I am crying now, even as I write this. X

Thank you.

Through the eyes of a fourteen year old…so many emotions and no satisfactory resolution…

As heart aching as it is well written.

Damn. Almost poetry.

Thank you for telling that sad story so well.

I'm aching! That story is so intense, so lovely. Beautifully written. Now, please, give us a happy one. 5*****

So young and innocent, but like so many other things at that time of life, unresolved. Thanks for the story.

Real and just so beautiful

Magnificent! This story is the reason the 750 word challenge should be a contest.

So beautifully done, it's heart-wrenching.

Thank you for this moving short story.

Well written sad story

*****Very touching story. Thanks for sharing.

I’m not sure I understand why they left. Was he doing drugs, or was he sick?