by RiverMaya
So beautifully done, it's heart-wrenching.
Thank you for this moving short story.
Magnificent! This story is the reason the 750 word challenge should be a contest.
So young and innocent, but like so many other things at that time of life, unresolved. Thanks for the story.
I'm aching! That story is so intense, so lovely. Beautifully written. Now, please, give us a happy one. 5*****
Through the eyes of a fourteen year old…so many emotions and no satisfactory resolution…
Maya,
I am deeply touched by this piece. I am crying now, even as I write this. X
Thank you.