by Soft19bim
War is an ugly waste of youth. Good story, i want to know more about our boys. Knowing the history of how gay men were treated and persecuted during that time, I would love to read how you craft their story/relationship. More please
My grandad used to tell me stories about the great war. This one captures the whole horror of it, juxtaposed with a beautiful love story. I felt horror, sadness, love and sympathy. A great effort.
A beautiful account of something positive coming out of the misery of war.....and how miserable was THAT war. Love does triumph! Thanks for your wonderful story.....and as others have written, I hope there's more!
The slow build, the artful way that historical accounts of the 'war to end all wars' are blended into a very erotic and, I think, realistic portrayal of love between two young men thrust into the horror of a war that was originally thought to be a short war and a chance for the youth of Britain to be blooded in combat.
Surely things like this happened in real life back then and the author has presented a plausible and erotic way that it might have been.
you are a good writer, very realistic, honest and hot considering the backdrop, keep writing, you have a gift