All Comments on 'Heaven In A Rage Ch. 01'

Hope to God there’s a brighter future for them. Feeling murderous. Too much truth in this fiction

Where is the story?

Very interesting start. I am looking forward to part 2. Your other serial story is different and ground breaking,,,, ,well it might be.....is this story going to be similar?

Part 2 should be posted quickly, followed by part 3.......please don t say you have not planned and written it by now.

Great start. So intrigued .... aliens

Lets get to the next chapter

Writing hard and punchy, ..... and very promising!

Your writing is exciting and what i really like is that i have no idea where you are going to take me next!