All Comments on 'Heaven Up Here'

What a fascinating take on death and Heaven and Hell. A fantastic Halloween story. I hope you win.

Thanks for the kind words -not holding out much hope, but it was fun writing it.

I enjoyed this imaginitive story and the range of kinks that are lightly applied: two on one, penis enlargement, orgasm control. The angels are downright terrifying. Good ending.

Thanks. I nearly took it in a completely different direction but glad I went the way I did!

Great short story with a completely different view. You'll have to write a sequel. Good luck.

Thanks - i did write more, but changed the ending and shortened it, so may well get back to it after my current project.