All Comments on 'Heavenly Hereafter Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

Great start, please continue...

But need more twists & turns, instead of this getting too vanila.

Nice plot though

Teacher44Teacher4426 days ago

So utterly outrageous. I love it.

SniperkingSniperking26 days ago

Pretty hot. wasn't a fan of drinking your own cum but to each is own. The daughter thing was a bit confusing. She starts out saying her "role" is a mother of four, then during sex she says heaven is empty and they he will father her daughters, then at the end again it is that the daughters already exist. So a bit confused about their roleplay and if he's going to father the daughters or if they already exist in their "story".

Ilfen1Ilfen125 days ago

I enjoy the metaphysical setting of this story. It allows you to dive right into this particular kind of fetish without need for foreplay, and yet also allows you kind of reflect on what makes it tick. Looking forward to more installments.

EtrocityEtrocity21 days ago

Great story so far.

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