by sweetlinda
You write good erotica, that's for sure. But it is clear that you have never been to Hedonism in your life! It has neither "corridors" nor "lifts" anywhere in the joint! A little research would go a long way. But, like I said, nice writing. Keep it up!
In Chapter one you met Allen now all of a sudden Howard appears.
SweetLinda is an amazing erotic writer. The more she writes, the better she gets!
Chapter three has to be Adele and Linda together on their own again, will they get to the pool... I hope not!
Definitely want to see more stories about Adele and Linda. Two very sexy ladies, whose stories just seem to get better.
wish the story continued with the two girls. Most men enjoy girl on girl events