All Comments on 'Hedonism Island: A Gloryhole Heaven'

As usual Jasmine, top of the pile, the pictures are first-rate as is your story line, can't wait for the next episode. 5 stars naturally, sorry my critique is so short, but needs must, I'm a bit moist at the moment.

Fantastic Jaz!!! Cant wait for more!!!!

You are so fantastic at making the reader desiring the next chapter

Part two was hotter then part one. I can't wait for part three to come out.

Will the husband become a big Black cumslut

Either way, just like hubby, i want a BBC up my ass.....

Bravo, Jiz, Bravo....

Hey guys, if you liked the pictures then feel free to look me up on Patreon, tonnes more stuff where this came from on there!

xoxoxo

Alison

This kind of illustrated story is going to set the new high bar standard! So excellent and hot to see the visuals. I love the cartoon voice bubbles for dialog.

Love the interracial sex. I hope the husband gets some black pussy. I could read all the words this time, but it's some of the worst writing you've produced, Jasmine. Little Annie Fanny would win a Nobel Prize for Literature in comparison to this! The art is great though. So I gave it 5 stars for the concept and the art and gave the dialogue a pass. I hope the dialogue is improved in the next episode. And the dialogue in the boxes still needs to be larger and easier to read.

I can’t wait until the next story!

I loved every part of this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Hitting many of my favorite fantasies and I love it.

The illustrations are amazing

Please do more of this story series, don’t mind if it takes time as long as it keeps getting better.

Great presentation. *****

I would my wife if she wants to suck BBC

im starting to use that but wont be as good as you, you should add black woman ass/pussy or shemale.. would love it ;)

Jasmine, as if your stories weren’t hot enough, these versions with the wonderful artwork by Alison take them to a higher level! I’m really looking forward to part 3, hoping that they both get some black pussy.

Also, as someone else posted, the introduction of a shemale or preferably a full hermaphrodite would be great.

On a side note, has Alison worked on any of your other stories?

Did she have her husband suck a big Black cumslut Sissy like she is

Please turn the husband into a gay cock lover who craves cum and loves taking cock up he's ass, just then the wife walks in and watches him go gay

Excellent! Great illustrations. I love her sunglasses; where can I get a pair? 5*, obviously.

Great illustrations, especially the cum, so rea.listic

This is fucking amazing! I also agree with other people. A black shemale fucking Amanda would be perfect!

Wow, just wow! I'm rock hard and dripping waiting for the next part!

So loved how she loses it and takes all those black cocks! Great illustrations.

Hi Jaz,

Same old. You are always my favourite!

And always a five, it seems. * * * * *

As for the illustrations - excellent. Blow jobs and cunt shot are fabulous.

Love you. Kisses...

Jack Auff x o

Story is good the art is amazing. The dialog is hard to read though.

Thanks for sharing.

The "comic strip" presentation was original, I enjoyed it. As always you are one of the best in Lit, and I enjoy reading all your stories. Looking forward to your next one.

I would love to be the husband here. I would gladly eat up all that cum; oral slut!! Love cunts, assholes, balls, cocks, and cum.

Pure unadulterated hedonism at its best.

Loving this series and illustrations too.

Can't wait for more

XXX

Great story of course. But the illustrations are the absolute best I have ever seen!!! Hot,hot,hot!!!! More please!

Did the husband suck a black coxk himself. If the wrre my wife, I were going to ask her if I could suck a bug black cock and taste his cum in my mouth.

The illustrations have been great, and the story as always is one of the best. Please keep it going!

Awesome Story ! The illustrations are amazingly hot and very erotic. Simply fantastic work by the author.

Please continue the story. The pictures are absolutely amazing.

I check Literotica every day hoping for the next part of the series!

Actress sucking a black man's cock cream out of my wife and knowing there's a couple of guys on the wall I asked her if she wants me going there and take one of those dicks in my mouth and suck on it

Great graphics and great story. She would be the perfect woman for me. I would love to watch her get completely drenched in cum and have her mouth and pussy overflowing in cum. Then she could lean back and watch and film me very very slowly licking up every drop of cum from her. Then she could have a drink and watch and film me sucking 10 cocks and have them all cum in my open mouth. We would do that every day. She could show her holiday videos to her girlfriends back home.

I like it too

That was different, and quite a welcome difference! I am glad hubby licked her cum-filled pussy. Just the best!

263. Loved it! Wish all your tales were illuminated. Maybe it would be interesting and a nice contrast to have the original story. Anyway more episodes are needed to view the entire vacation.

I kinda liked it but would have enjoyed it more were it photos instead of illustrations.

The illustrations were awesome though.

Bill S.

On her return from vacation the slut was served the divorce papers and the videos he had made of her adultery while on vacation he sent to her family friends and colleagues. Now she's an outlaw in town!

Great graphics and story. This is the fetish that me and my girlfriend are really into. She has turned me into an obedient Cuck with a strong CUM fetish. If that was us in the story, she would of made me lick and swallow every drop of CUM off of her body and out of her CUM drenched pussy. She would appoint the other women at the resort as CUM Masters, who could order me lick all CUM off of their bodies anytime. She would also tell all of the men that could jerk off in my open mouth and on my face anytime. She loves making me eat CUM, almost as much as I love her and others watching me eat CUM.