All Comments on 'Heidi and The Kaiser Ch. 01'

This is a masterful beginning! You draw the D/S personalities well, Heidi as clearly submissive and looking to submit, Kaiser as the slightly aloof dom who sees her potential. And Heidi's delayed gratification, her taking pleasure after the fact, looking back on the memory of her 'punishment', is fantastically hot! Really looking forward to more.

excellent beginning, reminds me a bit of the movie "secretary" although nothing other than the Doms and subs reaction to the order given and taken, but that is where the simliaritys end. Look forward to reading on. BDSM is the reason why i started reading literotica and then due to the unrealistic outlandish style of some writers i expanded on to other venues...so its wonderful to see a well done BDSM story...down to earth, realistic in most ways and well told....as always SK..keep up the great work i'd very much love to see more of this one also. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Selena is one of the finer authors on lit. This story is off to a great start. Well written.

Chick, you are somethin' else!

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