by Pixiehoff
This story is a masterclass in how to write erotica. Ash and Nic are rapidly becoming two of my favourite characters. You write beautifully, Pixie, always managing to get me wet and desperate for more. You seem to have found a new method of edging! 5 very well deserved stars.
Formidable (in French). Pixie darling, you have handled the taming of stepmother so well though I suspect the Miss Ashley will still need to keep her wits about her. Vlad and the white slavers have been primed for the morrow and Prince Khaled is expecting a new addition to his harem. I have every confidence that your exemplary imagination will devise a way for her to extract herself from any danger. Really looking forward to find out how you pull it off. Five stars again.
Panting........there are so many who claim to be a Mistress/Master but who privately crave to be treated as a sub. [no not me] You have captured it so well in this part of your story. One wonders who you have been talking to.
The twists and turns you keep giving us devoted fans, it is so good, too good for mere words.
You have left open so many scenarios for all of the 'cast' I wonder if two great minds think the same way?
5 XXXXX
Thank you, Bobbi, coming from you, that is quite the compliment - more to come xxxxx
Dr B; Fucking hell Pixie, from the virginial Vicar, to this, a pussy dripping sex feast, not only sexy, but a twisted step-mum plotting to sell-off her step-daughter to some perverted middle-east oligarch. You certainly have one twisted, perverted mind, love it. You are the absolutely best author on here, I would buy any book you published and I'm sure so would many other of your readers. Perfection, kinky, cunning, enticing and just so brilliantly developed. More please ASAP, err, you don't need to worry, five naturally, deserves so much more. OXOXO.
This story is so well written. I am enjoying it thoroughly. Thanks for sharing.
... again, a hot and amazing chapter ... great work, Pixie ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ as always, I can't wait for more! LisaR.
Thank you Lisa, the next part was submitted today, so should be up Wednesday xxxxx
AWC oh my ummmmm well what to day. Ummmmm I will be back in a few... I need to find a very very cold shower. Rellly good chapater (hard to type with one hand ... sorry ) ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ and ❤️
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Amber is sooooo much more diabolical than I had suspected. And to think I once admired Amber for “saving” Ash from a dangerous and destructive path. Fortunately, (and unfortunately for Amber’s devious plans) Ashley is not the naive and unsophisticated young lady she once was. The challenging path Ashley traveled has led to the discovery of her own power. - And with Nic there for love and support (and technical support), I am confident Ashley can “control” the situation. -Just like she “controlled” Amber during their dirty and dangerous liaison. Alisha is still a bit of a wildcard though, which adds a bit of uncertainty into the equation. Time for another popcorn run. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿
Thank you so much, Bunny, the final chapter has been submitted, so not long to wait xxxxx
Thank you, Anon. Yes, a feature of this has been Ashley's growth - quite how far she has grown the final chapter will reveal xxxxx
Nice table-turning on the evil stepmother! Will it be enough for Amber to change her wicked ways? Or will an intervention be needed in the 'nic' of time? Only the next episode will tell.
Oooh, very interesting…..
Ash has Amber just where she wants her and stepmummy Amber has no idea what’s about to happen to her!!
I know you keep the chapter coming fairly quickly but this was far too short and could have been extended out to make it even better. It still got 5⭐️ from me 😊
Thank you so much, Wiz. I agree, but my writing has a life of her own, I do my best with her ... :) xxxxx