All Comments on 'Helen'

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William smythWilliam smythover 11 years ago
Great first story

Good story line and very well written.

Five stars all the way.

Hope to see more from you--and soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More

Great. Lets have lots more of Helen please.

BordermanBordermanover 11 years ago
More adventures please.

Great one and well written too.- More adventures please, there is lots of potential..

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

Why don't I ever meet anyone like that on holiday- great story, well written, certainly got my cock throbbing :)

happy_blokehappy_blokeover 11 years ago
Good tale

I enjoyed it thanks, I think you should write more, take it slower though with more details.

WifewantsdpWifewantsdpover 11 years ago
Fun honeymoon

Sounds like you had a fun start to your honeymoon. We would love to read more. Keep the stories coming...

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