by LMood
Good story line and very well written.
Five stars all the way.
Hope to see more from you--and soon!
Great one and well written too.- More adventures please, there is lots of potential..
Why don't I ever meet anyone like that on holiday- great story, well written, certainly got my cock throbbing :)
I enjoyed it thanks, I think you should write more, take it slower though with more details.
Sounds like you had a fun start to your honeymoon. We would love to read more. Keep the stories coming...