All Comments on 'Helen'

You should never use a well-known company name for obvious reasons. A quick Google will check if the company exists.

are you mad

I do enjoy these kinds of stories and hope that there will be more to come.

I really like this story so-far Please continue

A good start, but I feel that's all it was - no real action, drama, or ending. I do hope you continue, but you should really have just added more pages to this one rather than making it a separate piece.

Thanks for the comments, long time since I had some positive ones:)

Note to self, as Anon Three and Four said, check that the invented company doesn't actualy exist.

Oooops !

As Max would say . . . .

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . sorry about that chief !

There will be a part Two as there has been some good response, thank you all.

Doesn't take much to leave a comment or send an email, and it means so much. Thanks again.

It turns out the company I invented exists. I have edited and reposted the story with a new company name and this will be up I hope in a few days.

Here in woop woop land we are a bit behind the times. I'm still awaiting this years dividend; and many years previous, on my East India Company stock holdings.

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