All Comments on 'Helen'

dumb, 1 star

... and with so many errors ...

I disagree with the comment below. Yeah, a couple typos, but otherwise well written. I came.

You have some continuity issues, like getting piss in her hair after you already had all of her hair shaved off. Also, she was told 1 orgasm per man in the beginning and that obviously wasn’t the case.

Even with the errors though, I really enjoyed it. Keep up writing. :)

You came because you are as dumb as the story and the writer.

Two typos? There were at least 20!

Perhaps you can't count or neither understand what you read when you come!

It was supposed to be a non consent story. The plot is not something spectacular. But this last part, the way it is, was totally unnecessary.