All Comments on 'Helga in the Mechanical Dollhouse'

by Flyck

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FlyckFlyckover 6 years agoAuthor
Woops, important note

If it's not clear, or if you simply didn't know it existed, this is a sequel/spin off of Avis in the Mechanical Dollhouse. You may wish to read that first.

I'd edit in an Author's note, but it's simply not worth it with how long it takes. Sorry 'bout that.

ExescortExescortover 6 years ago
I thought,

It obvious this is another part of Mechanical Dollhouse, but then I adored that story because it reminded me of something. Great sequel, bring on the next chapter.... pretty please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loved it!

Great story. I love Helga's voice.

Minor quibble: "taunt" is not the same as "taut".

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