All Comments on 'Helical Saga Ch. 01-03'

amazing cant wait to read more

this story needs some sort of warning at the beginning, so people know what they're getting into.

Good point, thank you. This is my first story here and I forgot tags aren't immediately visible. I've re-submitted this with a warning at the start about some of the themes.

Personally I think tags are good enough. I always skip to the last page to read the tags and I figure anyone not doing that better be up for whatever or willing to put down a lot of stories they start. But it is a fair point anon made.

Cut short. Too bad about that.

This story is really good I hope you will post a sequel.

This story is good plz write more

Write more please I beg