All Comments on 'Helicopter Son'

Great story, every boy's mommy dream come true. Wonder what they'll do next?

So far so good....looking forward to rest of the story.

Such a great story!! Can’t wait to see what adventures they get into going forward!

This is great. I hope there is a sequel

Suddenly becomes FAR less interesting when you tell us that the mom is a skank. Far more I/T heat is she's just the opposite until they get together.

Nice and hot. Wonderful how son and his mom so comfortably began their sexual relationship. Can't wait to see just how far out and kinky they can be. Exhibitionism, swinging, bisexuality (for both of them), Anything!

Great beginning to a multi-part story, that could go many different directions including but not limited to becoming a true couple

Great story!

Great story, but now it is time to write more. Might you tell us more in your bio?

Scandalous and kinky, what more could one ask? Hope there is a second part.

Good first story. Add some romance or affection into the next one though...

Great story! Keep writing.

Nice story.

Great story, very good at building the tension and lovely gentle togetherness to complete.

Please keep writing and posting here.

I hope there is more but don't make her a slut. Great build up. Maybe a little rushed getting to the bedroom. Well done. Thank you.

LSD hallucinations in the deep south!?

A great story! I hope you will honor us by continuing the saga of the “Helicopter Son”!

Yeah, this is good

Loved the story....hope there is a chapter 2!

looking forward to what...."maybe you will" might bring!

This is an excellent first story from you. Well written, the dialogue seemed natural and the story itself is certainly plausible. You get a rare 5 stars from me. Looking forward to your future contributions.

Very well written! Congratulations

Absolutely amazing story telling. Keep it up!

Has any writer that's ever had a character performing oral sex on a partner after applying sunscreen ever tasted that shit? If they had they wouldn't use it much less putting it in a woman's vagina

Events and situations lead to scenarios families would never think of. The parents covert nude sun bathing allows mom after tragedy to overtly love son.

The flow of the story was masterfully crafted in both content and mechanics. Inspired by real events I've been reading incest since 1974 and this is one of the best.

It’s a new sunscreen from Pfizer that prevents monkey pox and tastes like strawberry…lol. Thanks for the comment. Next time I’ll totally disrupt the flow and describe how they removed all traces of sunscreen. Maybe I’ll even describe the aggravated skin bumps caused by shaving and the occasional flatulence and pussy farts that happens during sex.

But seriously, did you miss the part about the warm washcloth?

Great little read! Thank you

Keep on writing. That was a hot little story.🍾

Too cliche.

Nice story. It wasn't my mom watching me jack off on the patio but my next door neighbor, she mentioned it in passing about six years later. Oh.

Seemed to lack a little more fullness to the story. However, it was really hot and I personally liked the love & lust. 5/5

Thanks for the mostly positive comments. I actually am surprised it has been read so many times and for the most part enjoyed. I really didn't think about extending the story. The tease by the mother at the end was supposed to be just that, a tease. I agree with one of the comments that the bedroom scene was rushed a bit. My thought was the mother had been without for so long she couldn't wait.

Also, just to let you know I am kind of a manic writer. When it hits me I write a lot. Then there are lulls. I have other stories I have posted elsewhere that I may repost here. At least the ones that seemed to be enjoyed by some readers.

Again, thanks for the feedback and for the reader who commented LSD in the deep south... sorry, born and raised up north. We are everywhere!

A wonderful story…will reread it many times I’m sure…Nothing hotter than a totally confident and also self-centered mother…who cares about her virile son’s future…the important thing is her orgasms, her craving for her son’s potent cock, exploding in her hot fertile and unprotected cunt…throwing her thigh over her baby boy once she’s done…giggling…

Love it! Absolutely the hottest thing I’ve read here in maybe forever. I know I’m not alone when I say I would love for this story to continue. 5 stars, without doubt. 10 if I could.

AWESOME a very good love story of mother and son one of the best I've read in a while you could feel the build up to sex!!! You should write more of this story??? 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Waiting on multiple parts from this story