All Comments on 'Hell Hath No Fury...'

but even after graduating from "collage" he can't spell it.

somepeople should not write

I would have been better off picking up other peoples dog poop over reading this crap of a story.

After forcing himself on women for too many years he gets payed back. I thought you did a good job of writing.

Not to enjoyable to read. But I can understand it.

Thanks for writing!

i guess for some anonimalies there is no fun

in a story at all when a woman has her revenge

for a change. how predictable...

nice story, thanks

situation rectified

As others have said the cheating husband was an arsehole and got what was coming to him. Although I would say this is a little extreme couldn't she just give him the divorce papers and leave him. That would be easier and simpler.

This was a nice ending especially with the assisting nurse in the room. Nicely written.

Pay back is a bitch. Keep writing.

Very, very funny. I'm not surprised some people don't get it. Good one trashcan, 90%...Mancelt.

I thought it was a piece of crap myself, but different strokes for different folks, as they say

I am not laughing. Humanity is the only species that thinks humiliation and pain are funny. He did a bad thing. Call the cops: Bubba will do a long term job on him. The scene was not funny.

Satire or not, this belongs in a different category. The writing was fair. There was nothing erotic in this story and most authors have the courtesy to say so up front. That way, readers interested in "Literotica" can look for something else. One might say that the wayward husband deserved humiliation and pain for cheating on his wife without remorse, but rape could land the three in jail -- something just like this actually happened last August (look up the Ziemann case); the husband was bound, tortured, and then his genitals glued with super glue to his stomach. Yeah, pretty funny -- not.

I did not see any humor. This should have not been in the Loving Wives section because there was not a loving wife, just a vengeful and vindictive one. How would the three of them felt if they had killed him. Consenquences can last forever and they might have gone to jail for a very long time. Was it really worth it?

What can I say, I hated it.

But he cheated he deserved it.

Eye for an eye

If anyone wants to slag me, please be brave enough to leave contact info.

Sincerely

Eric

He deserved something! He was not a very likeable character. I don't begrudge the wife her revenge. On the other hand, that sister in law would be going down damn hard at some point later on. And it ought to be sooner than later. Thanks for sharing. Ohio, USA

The left him alive. Now if he is ANY KIND of man he'll work on getting his revenge. I'd like to read about that "hint - hint".

Was this supposed to be funny?

Reverse the genders, have the man beat the sh*t out of the woman and sodomize her with a bottle for cheating. Still appropriate ?

Trashcan you are well named like your story should be in the trashcan -

A fine piece of garbage, and nothing more!

Was this so poorly done ON PURPOSE?

This story takes it in the a_s_s !

For posting such crap the author deserves to have the shit beat out of him.

Sexual harassment, rape. rough sex. Fuck him in the ass!

Exept the other women weren't raped. They could have said no and left.

So the martriage is over. Candie looses her job... Goes to jail, he hunts down the bitch twins. Then butt fucks both before having a black biker gang repeatedly gang rape the twins before selling them to a Mexican whore house. lovely story...

To bad it was in the END!!!!!

When the police arrived there was obviously a crime scene. He gets to the hospital and of course they do a drug test. Find drugs in his system. Not only was it unlawful restraint, possible kidnapping, sex assault and drugs the divorce would be a slam dunk. doesn't matter if he cheated or not now. Poor wife and sister in law. 1 star until you Finish The Damn Story!!!

Know everything and know nothing. Who will be available to admit to the deserved buggering? Certainly not the three women, the sis-in-law was at the hospital and in reception when the ruptured asshole arrived. She had witnesses to prove she was there all the time. The wife had witnesses to prove she was at work and in business interviews with her boss, had been at work all day long and had witnesses to prove it. His assistant was at her desk and everyone in the shop could and would swear to it. DNA from semen deposits, plastic hardly ever shoots, no luck there

So stuff it up your ignorant ass anony, you lose.

I loved it; 5*. Does that make me a weirdo?

Served the bastard right.

You left out the consequences. His sister-in-law would NOT have been allowed to treat him. Besides she's in handcuffs. Since the women left all the evidence. Their fingerprints. Their DNA in the spit and piss. The registration for the room. The drugs in his system that were still there when the hospital ran the tox screen. The wedding bands. The women are going to prison for years. Assault, battery, sexual assault, rape, sodomy, illegal restraint, illegal drugs and spousal abuse. The list goes on and on. While the women sat in prison getting used as Big Bertha's Bitches he got a divorce and kept all the marital assets. His sister-in-law's husband divorced her. If Candie had a boyfriend, he dropped her. These women were so hell bent on revenge that they didn't stop to consider the consequences? Pretty stupid. The tape they left of him ass fucking some woman or Candie? So what? He didn't rape or coerce anyone. He's guilty of no crime. I wonder what the sisters thought about as Bertha and her friends ass raped them nightly? This was poorly thought out drivel.

1 star

He has the hospital call the police. The police arrest the sisters for illegal restraint, assault, battery, sexual assault, sodomy, spousal abuse and a number of other felonies. Both women go to prison where they become Big Bertha's Bitches. He gets a divorce, all the marital assets and many other women's asses to fuck. This was just stupid. You commit the crime, you better be prepared to do the time. Awful. Of course some men would just wait to get out of the hospital, get their gun and put the sisters in shallow graves - after he repeatedly ass fucked them both.

1 star

I guess many of these commentators don’t like it when it’s the guy who is the cheating douche and gets what’s coming to him. They only like it when the cheating wife is burned to a crisp. Personally I like it when any cheater get their just desserts. 5*

The wife and sister-in-law hooefully the most of the next few weeks. By the time he finished with his two tormentors, no man ever looked at either of them again without disgust and pity. Severe facial scarring tends to have that effect on people. That two sisters were the victims of acid attacks as they walked towards their cars in a dark parking lot was in the news for several days. Interestingly, the police thought the husband's alibi was almost too good to be true, but they could find no evidence to disprove it. He at least waited until the wife was released from the hospital following her first plastic surgery and series of skin grafts before he had her served with his petition for divorce. He never met with her again, explaining she was now too hideous to look upon. She killed herself with an overdose of pills a little more than a year after she became the monster with the melted face. He did not attend her funeral.