All Comments on 'Hellacious Hospitality Ch. 02'

This is simply delightful! Really looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you.

You mentioned in the foreword that you had an issue creating dialouge. Being a heavy reader I thought your dialogue flowed smoothly and felt totally natural. Though I feel that I know Ben better than the other two characters. But keep up the great work.

Chapter 4 is just about ready to go live, where I wanted to make the announcement, but I'm going to post here as well, to catch newcomers to my series, or even people who feel like re-reading before jumping into the new material.

Given the positive reception to my writing so far, I've been super-energized to take my creative talents to a whole new level, but I won't be able to do so without a bit of help from my loyal fans. To this end, I've started a Patreon page where, in addition to being able to grab my stories in downloadable format, I have dreams of also providing character art of all the lovely ladies in my stories. Please, check it out through my Profile page, which I'll also be using to post news and updates as they come up.

This is just an experiment of mine, so I hope I don't turn people away, thinking I'm just here to "sell out". Ultimately, the stories in my head want to be told in one way or another. Some additional financial support will help that come faster and more regularly, with some additional supplemental material to bring it even further to life, but failing that, I'll still continue to update this story for free.

So please, just keep up to date with everything I've got going on via my Profile Page. Thanks all, and please continue to enjoy my writings!

This seems to be a well written story, however it was just too descriptive for me.

Very well written story.

I thought Caeli was jealous, now she's ready to share Ben?

I'm enjoying this so far--I see a lot of potential here. I also am a sucker for succubi.

Is Caeli meant to be pronounced "Kaylee?"

Good story and concept. I agree with a few of the others about her being jealous and at the end of this one she is sharing? Also, way too descriptive during “action” scenes. Some is good, a lot is pace killing. :)