All Comments on 'Hellacious Hospitality Ch. 03'

I tried writing once and what I ended up with was a stilled confused mess. I really enjoyed the how you created conversations that occurred in this latest installment. The personality of your characters shone through illuminating both the story and who they were as beings. I look forward to reading the next instalment.

This story is totally engrossing / captivating! I just found this part and had to backtrack to the beginning and work thru in 1 sitting. This is the kind of story that gives full expression to the old saying about getting Playboy for the articles :-)

Thank you very much for this wonderful gem and looking forward to where it goes...

oh, I can't wait for another part, waiting is exhilarating! Wonderful story, I read it for a plot :) I mean, hot parts are equally captivating to storyline or characters. Please, don't stop writing

Bloody amazing. Truly one of the hidden Gems of Literotica!

Intriguing concept, unique yet familiar characters, lyrically written, and ethereally but pants-tighteningly erotic. With just a few stories, you already have risen far above the norm on Literotica; I eagerly await your next offering!

Chapter 4 is just about ready to go live, where I wanted to make the announcement, but I'm going to post here as well, to catch newcomers to my series, or even people who feel like re-reading before jumping into the new material.

Given the positive reception to my writing so far, I've been super-energized to take my creative talents to a whole new level, but I won't be able to do so without a bit of help from my loyal fans. To this end, I've started a Patreon page where, in addition to being able to grab my stories in downloadable format, I have dreams of also providing character art of all the lovely ladies in my stories. Please, check it out through my Profile page, which I'll also be using to post news and updates as they come up.

This is just an experiment of mine, so I hope I don't turn people away, thinking I'm just here to "sell out". Ultimately, the stories in my head want to be told in one way or another. Some additional financial support will help that come faster and more regularly, with some additional supplemental material to bring it even further to life, but failing that, I'll still continue to update this story for free.

So please, just keep up to date with everything I've got going on via my Profile Page. Thanks all, and please continue to enjoy my writings!

Well written so far...excellent (apparent) premise, great characters, and great dialogue!

Love the less than subtle Twilight diss:

"Don't even get me started on the sparkles. What kind of half-baked, delusional mind made that a thing?"

11/10 Room 346 Keys!!!!!

love the story so far

Loving this so far, I think I can see a potential conflict between his desire to help and what the Hotel/Haven wants and what the mostly female residents want, I’m really hoping Ley lines etc come into it somewhere as afaik they’re a subject that’s almost untouched here on Lit. I’m also intrigued by the Haven - which I suspect will have its own personality, maybe a remnant of its original creator?

Really really good so far, 5⭐️ all the way, please keep writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

So far this story is fun.