All Comments on 'Hellacious Hospitality Ch. 08'

Avid readers may have picked up on a little off-screen character development for our lovely little succubus.

If you find yourself curious as to how that shift in attitude came about, you can read up on the misadventures she's gotten herself into while her beau was away, in Chapter 7.5, exclusive to my Patreon subscribers.

This was an experiment of mine in creating Patron incentives. I've written my story to be perfectly understandable without those full details, and I never would have written that material otherwise because it clashes with the pacing and sense of direction I wanted to employ with this series.

But for those who really enjoy these characters and how they grow and develop together, I promise Chapter 7.5 is absolutely worth a read. I poured my heart and soul into it just as much as everything else.

Story conti ues to evolve, look forward to next installment.

Yeah, this chapter really didn’t work for me. The story just didn’t flow as well. Your patreon exclusive seems to have thrown off your main story too much. The whole Caeli wardrobe malfunction just came across as odd to me.