All Comments on 'Hellacious Hospitality Ch. 11'

Love what you've done with the place. The greenery does offset the ruins to provide an interesting counterpoint. So xochitl is more into sexy succubi than hunky humans ?

Hopefully we get to see and hear from Luna again. She's a very intriguing character. And, ugh, I'm so over Xochitl and her holier-than-thou attitude... Good drama there though. 5/5*

The end of this one dropped off quickly.

Many times you have no way of knowing who is speaking as often the dialect is generic and could apply to anyone. It’s not until a “he said” or “she said” that you can ground the conversation.