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Click here((If you've enjoyed this, my second erotic story ever, please vote and comment. I love all sorts of constructive criticism, as it helps me hone my skills. I greatly look forward to hearing what you have to say.))
N.I.G.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoThe only way this could get any better would be if it were actually in comic format.
Anonymousover 10 years agoGreat fun. Terrific dialogue. You obviously liked the interplay between Bastet and Maggie. I'm sure the goddess will make more appearances. At this point (end of part 2), I'm wondering about more details of Empire City and the rest of its denizens. I hope you keep up the good work NIG.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoGreat read. loved the humor and the erotic possiblities of your world. Was having a wonderfull time when she was being enroled by the goddess. Might have gotten better but all i could think of was furball when she was eating her out. sorry.. but that was what stuck in my mind, and coulnd't shake it. It was great for a laugh, and that is always good. grin... will be loving the humor or the erotica of your other additions.
NicoleAmyover 11 years agoA very enjoyable story so far and I love the humour! Cant wait to read more :)
SillySalamandaover 11 years agoIt's fantastic! love this story, love maggie, love this universe you are creating, so can't wait for the adventures to come. great writing style and amazing sense of humour!
you are a star N.I.G ;)
please hurry with more chapters, I'm totally hooked!
NaughtyIrishGirlover 11 years agoAuthorThank you everyone for the kind comments and the great feedback. Not to mention the voting, which has made this my first H rated story! I'm delighted that you all are enjoying my little tail...erm...tale thus far!
I'm glad that you feels it's a bit different than most comic stories. The best ones I've read, have taught me that if you really flush out the personality of your characters, people will will enjoy the story much more. After all, this is literotica, not pornhub. You people are here because you like plots!
Please keep the feedback coming, as it only makes my style better. Thank you again, and I hope you keep enjoying this series.
NIG
Wolfhammerover 11 years agoCome on and bring us the rest of it aswell now.
Great fun reading it, I'm quite excited about the rest of it
Scurvydog44035over 11 years agoI enjoyed what I felt was a significant difference in what is generally called superhero stories here on Literotica. I will stay tuned. :o)
duke1951over 11 years agoA fantastic follow-up to your first effort, and so much more this time. What an imagination you have! I never thought that a Goddess Cat's tail could be so incredibly sexy!
Already looking forward to what trouble Maggie/Hellcat can get into next time.
Oh, and thanks for the kind words in your intro, but I'm sure that you'd have produced some memorable stories anyway!
