by dreadknots
This is one of those stories that has so many possibilities if it continues. If you do keep going, I look very forward to enjoying even more of your work.
TJ
personally, I want to hear what happens to Jenny & the rest of the members of this cult.
How can Disney be wasting money in crappy remakes when they have a perfectly wonderful princess story right here ripe for cinematic adaptation.
Like how it's from typical 'summon a succubus and get transformed into one'. World build was interesting and sets up further parts or stories. Struggled to visulize Ash's height with no detail how tall she was. Lily's was looking up and Ash grew in feet, but was concerned about stretching wings and damaging the living room. Wouldn't her head have be touching the ceiling. Or if Lily is really a giant wouldn't Ash's be larger and go though the ceiling. Love to see another part with Jenny and Michael being turned into succubus and incubus servants as a reward.
Reading the comments yesterday made my brain have an idea for a sequel: the penitents are under new leadership and they're now going door to door to show that they're now *extremely* penitent.