All Comments on 'Hell's Belles'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Loved it

This is one of those stories that has so many possibilities if it continues. If you do keep going, I look very forward to enjoying even more of your work.

TJ

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great stuff!

More please and thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great

Great story! I hope plan on continuing this amazing story!

tarthearttartheartalmost 4 years ago
;)

personally, I want to hear what happens to Jenny & the rest of the members of this cult.

MashuganaMashuganaalmost 4 years ago
Outrageous

How can Disney be wasting money in crappy remakes when they have a perfectly wonderful princess story right here ripe for cinematic adaptation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hell of a story

Like how it's from typical 'summon a succubus and get transformed into one'. World build was interesting and sets up further parts or stories. Struggled to visulize Ash's height with no detail how tall she was. Lily's was looking up and Ash grew in feet, but was concerned about stretching wings and damaging the living room. Wouldn't her head have be touching the ceiling. Or if Lily is really a giant wouldn't Ash's be larger and go though the ceiling. Love to see another part with Jenny and Michael being turned into succubus and incubus servants as a reward.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeabout 3 years ago

Dreadie... pretty sure this one has a sequel in it. Pretty sure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Without a sequel I can only give it a 4, but its promising.

LiterKnightLiterKnightover 2 years ago

Reading the comments yesterday made my brain have an idea for a sequel: the penitents are under new leadership and they're now going door to door to show that they're now *extremely* penitent.

LatexZashaLatexZashaalmost 2 years ago

Sequel. How Jenny is handling it

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